You guys barely comment and honestly it's a little disappointing. I've been trying really hard to improve the story. I even expanded the plot and added more scenes because I truly feel like I can make it better. Writing this story makes me happy, but sometimes it feels like I'm writing for invisible readers.

When I see 600-700 views but almost no comments, it really makes me wonder if the story is actually connecting with you or not. I'm not expecting hundreds of comments, but at least tell me how you feel about the chapter - what you liked, what you didn't, which part stood out.